A.O. Avalon

Bonjour, El! Seemed fitting b/c of your name but anyway...nice to meet you!!

Dr. Seuss' high school art teacher hated the way he drew, and critized him endlessly. Critisim here isn't malicously here... especially if it comes from Tess...that was one of the ...

*shakes fists at crysi* i hate 1337. w00t has a t on teh end, fire, because 13373r5 are nutz!

I have an idea of where you're going with the song, and i like it. have you considered making the year of it's release be the year of Hana's death? ...

lol, yes i found the first chapter, fire. (me unobservant? noooo never.) Yes, Kay, in America we say "zee" and not "zed". Differences like those are why it drives me ...

This is an incomplete story, obviously. However i'm working out some plot plausibility things currently, so this is all i can give you. cheers. Alyce It is late in November ...

Yet, still, he was, but his own admittance, a selfish man But should obviously be by..... But a bag of gold coins could change a man’s heart, and if he ...

Two picky little things: A tall man If you've already introduced his character, then "THE tall man" would work better, because it indicates that this is a specific tall man, ...

it's alot less annoying than the cingular commercial with the triplets who can't act.

Crysi--yeah i don't really know anyone but those two, so i'm anxious to meet new people... so nice to meet you!! :P norris-- i will. disappointed's a tricky one. :D ...

nice to meet you mim! i have a few pieces of poetry up, and i'm working on a story for the sci-fi section, so read away!! :D

thank ya much firestarter!!

This is Alexis, be gentle with her, she's very fragile, and I'm hoping to get a few more poems out of her. ___________________________________________________ At the spot in the room where ...

I like this poem an awful lot, I just feel like it's missing a few pieces. He swigs on his can, watching out for the Merc, Another client telling his ...

Pain eased itself through every pore in my body Eased isn't working for me... It's too gentle a word, it doesn't fit with the rest of the images. A tad ...